Here’s a great story obviously written by a pragmatic and smart individual. Perfect delivery of lines that are borderline painful and hilarious at times. The punch comes unannounced.It’s the right mix of sarcasm, laughter and a slap of reality in a fantasy realm with characters and schemes so believable I as a reader applaud it. Enjoyable and worthwhile read so far! I hope the quality will stay consistent, if not improve as the chapters go by.
IT was kinda good until chapter 60 and up the mc actually acts like 10 year old he has no goal or any type of intellect or experience of a 30 year old when he attends the dukes party its so much going on in the background i dont even know whats happening theirs like 5 different groups with different goals and agendas the mc is just getting pushed around with nothing on his mind but woman that's the only thing he does to get back at them not oh so you forced me into a dinner im gonna get your wife someday oh you punched me well im gonna take your wife we find out he has a lot of talent and magic but he hasn't trained since then he only did it for a mission once and that's it it's so much happening and his face and its like he's ignoring it i see where the plot can go and it has potential but the mc is just too stupid and immature
"hmm, I am not going to give up on you... I am just trying to show you that we want the same thing here.." he stretched his hand forward and held Miray's hand.
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