Good beginning, lets see how it flows. Though somewhat cliched genre and story line, the characters should make it interesting to read. YO YO YO YO YO YO YO
not that good.........................................................................................................................................................................
Enjoyed the novel for a while, until it was repeatedly pointed out that the author and main character are sorry homophobic and have an unhealthy view of sex. Out of several sexual encounters there is one that is consensual, and it's not with a real person. Dropped it after it was stated that the main character thought he wouldn't have saved a character because he thought they were "a gay".
This novel is boring and the author is very repetitive. I disliked this novel from the start, but decided to keep going because I trusted that it should get better afterwards, since there are so many positive reviews. Alas, after almost 400 chapters, I can't read it anymore, not only it is boring as hell, but it gets me angry by how badly written it is. I deeply regret wasting my time reading this piece of trash.
Lol, this is clearly edited mtl, I saw many indications because I'm an mtl reader. Like on top of my head when the translator mistaken "role" for "character", they both have same chinese character and seems like the "translator" missed that and didn't edit it.
Another indication is whenever there were screams and howls they turned into "———!!", that there is because mtl usually ignore whatever it is before the ———, it should probably be like "Ahh———!!" or something like that, didn't check the raw so I could probably wrong about this. The most hilarious mistake was at chapter 37, there's one paragraph left unedited with mtl name Li Jie instead of Lize and Rod instead of Rhode and using the funny mtl grammar, and the cherry on top is a note by editor asking for this Winnie guy to check the paragraph and since the note still in the final product, it's obvious this Winnie guy didn't do his job.
For the story though, it's one of the most interesting transported into game world webnovel I've read (at least until where I am), my only concern is author spend 20% of narratives to describing/glorifying mc, you don't need to repeat dozens of times that mc is strongest guild leader in past life.
The synopsis caught my interest and I can't stop reading after the first chapter with this badass MC. The story flowed well and the amazing translation quality piques my curiosity too.
Thanks for translating this wonderful novel~ :D
Oooo the MC respawning with his powerful abilities? That's what I'm looking for in an MC, but I feel sorry that he has to cope with his sister's death though :(
Good so far but there's minus from me so not full five star since what I expect is that he only has normal system! nor overpowered like this one which could build stronghold in flash lol!
So, 4.6 is good already! Don't expect too much haha! At least I'm not that meanie like 1-3 star army who attacking my novel! haha!~
The first 800-900 are d*mn good, the novel is a bit h*rny but it's still pretty good
After a certain "event" that happened in chapters 900, I started to dislike the author and the story, he shouldn't have included that kind of thing, apart from the fact that the plot becomes f*ck*ng boring, slow and lazy.
It's like the first 900 chapters were written by someone with good writing and then his replacement arrived who didn't even read what the previous one did and wanted to try to keep up, the MC stops being everything he was, he tries to elevate other characters when that was never the point of the novel, quite a few new waifus are left without much time on screen, those 400 chapters until the end could have been well used but they decided to deviate into other less interesting topics and into boring and disgusting plots and fetishes of the author .
this novel is really good, I think it's a little unfair that it has such a low rating (of course this is just my opinion). The plot is good, the romance is also good, just the MC's personality is a little annoying at times, but nothing that makes you give up reading. I don't remember exactly when the harem starts, but the *nc*st is only after half of the novel
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putting that aside, this is a really good story with great potential.
Another indication is whenever there were screams and howls they turned into "———!!", that there is because mtl usually ignore whatever it is before the ———, it should probably be like "Ahh———!!" or something like that, didn't check the raw so I could probably wrong about this. The most hilarious mistake was at chapter 37, there's one paragraph left unedited with mtl name Li Jie instead of Lize and Rod instead of Rhode and using the funny mtl grammar, and the cherry on top is a note by editor asking for this Winnie guy to check the paragraph and since the note still in the final product, it's obvious this Winnie guy didn't do his job.
For the story though, it's one of the most interesting transported into game world webnovel I've read (at least until where I am), my only concern is author spend 20% of narratives to describing/glorifying mc, you don't need to repeat dozens of times that mc is strongest guild leader in past life.
Thanks for translating this wonderful novel~ :D
So, 4.6 is good already! Don't expect too much haha! At least I'm not that meanie like 1-3 star army who attacking my novel! haha!~
The first 800-900 are d*mn good, the novel is a bit h*rny but it's still pretty good
After a certain "event" that happened in chapters 900, I started to dislike the author and the story, he shouldn't have included that kind of thing, apart from the fact that the plot becomes f*ck*ng boring, slow and lazy.
It's like the first 900 chapters were written by someone with good writing and then his replacement arrived who didn't even read what the previous one did and wanted to try to keep up, the MC stops being everything he was, he tries to elevate other characters when that was never the point of the novel, quite a few new waifus are left without much time on screen, those 400 chapters until the end could have been well used but they decided to deviate into other less interesting topics and into boring and disgusting plots and fetishes of the author .
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