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I don’t know if it’s lost in translation or the author is racist, but I’m pretty sure the author is racist extremely racist. How do you get into American basketball and be racist to African-Americans like he calls African-Americans sewer he considers a sewer creatures.
Overall, an interesting premise. I am sure that with the current situation, there will probably be more stories placed in this timeframe. The quality is pretty good overall, but there were a couple of parts where present and past tense were confusing as well as some dialogue that could be smoothed out. But that can all be fixed with an edit. The MC is pretty well developed, and props to the author for such long chapters. Keep writing!
He stopped for a moment and looked into her desire-filled eyes. "Please don't stop yourself." He whispered gently. "Kiss me back. I want you to be mine. But I want you to have me, too." Then he claimed hers again. This time teasing her gently, encouraging her, urging her to release her desire.
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