oh ****, holy ****, author, if you're going to write a novel of this kind, do it right, because it gives cancer to the eyes, this novel deserves the Nobel prize for being the **** **** of the year.
This novel is only good to pass the time the MC is crap story development is crap and he followed by misfortune everywhere he goes and cause those around him to die this is a continuous cycle
Aside from the very unique and unexpected way he dies which i think is a lil ingenious but still somewhat forced. Wellll the story development and story itself errrrr :(
Although the story makes our protagonist miserable, it is because of his aura as you know that the protagonist will has a miserable life before he can get happiness in the end so i think i'm gonna wait for the next chapter....
Colorless | White (Common) | Green (Uncommon) | Blue (Rare) | Orange (Super Rare) | Red (Ancient) | Purple (Mythical) | Rainbow (Legendary) | Transparent (Godly) ?? Colorless is the same color as transparent no ?
I like It, give a try to this novel people-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
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