A quick spoiler-free review, as someone who preread the first 25 chapters. You will not be disappointed with this novel. If you enjoyed Rwtss, Elyon's work, or the fantasy genre that includes unique twists with reincarnation you will not be disappointed. The book has many similar elements to the author's past works and the world-building, description, character development, and urge to "READ MORE" is done wonderfully.
Try this book out if your looking for a story that strays from typical tropes and creates a wonderful new world you can imagine inside your head.
So childish, I enjoyed a lot RWTSS but this one nope. The novel it's good, don't misunderstand me but again I feel I am reading a story for childs and this William compared with the other one is worst.
The writing is quality is superb, the world building is also well written, power system is easy to understand, but the character is just so lame, starting to his decision making and his shounen attitude, he is always being spoon feed. he is an adult in his past life yet his thinking is similar to a child. i cannot continue reading
I would like to preface this review by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I would definitely recommend it to someone. I just think there is a minor issue that keep it from earning a five star rating.
The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it.
The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family. I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least.
Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!
Another review, aside from my dislike of the mc cuz of his childishness, I also vehemently dislike the boar cai. Seriously, it's getting tedious to read the novel when like every chapter has that boar talking cringe asf.. I mean it's ok to make a comedic character but this is just way too much.
I like the idea of the Mc being a necromantic summoner, and while I am a bit biased with summoning novels I truly like the story. and while the Mc looks and feels a lot like William he has his own characteristics that different him.
mc also has a terrible naming sense
but besides that good novel
I like the novel but mc is just too unbearable sometimes. He's a reincarnation but he acts soo childish.. tbh mc is the only problem in the novel.. hopefully in future chapters he will start to mature as he was supposed to be considering that he is a reincarnator
very good read, the main character is a William
copy but with necromancy and smaller harem. i haven't been able to find any foxes yet, but i will keep waiting for some of them. Star reading now!!!
I have read it a bit before when it was released Planning to start from the start once again. I have asked it before in an old review and will ask it again.
Author-san, do you have a fetish for half- elves with red hair and green eyes??
elyon is deleting any reviews that points accurate criticism and is below three stars.. u can go see all the reviews. you wont find reviews that are openly criticizing the book or have given a low rating. thats really shameful elyon
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Try this book out if your looking for a story that strays from typical tropes and creates a wonderful new world you can imagine inside your head.
The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it.
The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family. I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least.
Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!
mc also has a terrible naming sense
but besides that good novel
copy but with necromancy and smaller harem. i haven't been able to find any foxes yet, but i will keep waiting for some of them. Star reading now!!!
Author-san, do you have a fetish for half- elves with red hair and green eyes??
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