Whilst i am certainly a bit late in commenting on this novel. I could fairly say this novel won't be everyone's cup of tea. The amount of detail in this book is impeccable, everything that make you confused you will know as they author puts detail into everything he writes about. The story development, the cultural aspects, even the characters gestures, emotions and thoughts are conveyed clearly. The only downfall I could think of is probably the pacing of the story. The novel is written in such a way that is incredibly dense and that won't be everyone's cup of tea. So give it a try, this is the type of book that you would either love it or hate it.
Fun light hearted book. When a little longer 70/100 pages. Could easily sell on Kindle. For around Β£7....................................................hate leaving long reviews......................................................
The story has been interesting, looking forward to what's to come!πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Ignore the tags, only the system one is real, there is no harem, yaoi, weak mc, ntr, or (at least to my knowledge) any plagiarism.This is a world designed solely by the author, and all the characters (well, those that matter) are likable; the grammar is rarely incorrect and the story is quite enjoyable.Those tags are just fake and leave me wondering who wastes their time vandalising someone else's hard work π.
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This author tried to write something great but ended up with this messed up result. The power system is not explained properly and you get the feeling that the author tried to revise his idea of the power system many times. Overall I felt that the author wrote this story by thinking in the spot with zero planning for even the next chapter.
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