Stimulating To Be Raised By A Virtual Lover

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.Premise was fine then ,2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

Isn't it scary how right after reading the synopsis we know there is a cult but a few minutes later the name completely disappears from our minds? Sometimes I put nicknames on sects. It usually depends on the technique the sect provides. The author rarely explains where the name came from. It looks like a football team name no one cares.

I love this book. Finished reading it and it was very good. I even want more. I will be happy if the author can write the sequel like how other famous books do when the readers are asking for more. It will be more fun if there is an higher level world out there that he can go to where there are god's, demons, kings, emperor's, civilizations

Hey everyone, I'm the author of SPYP and I'm just making sure everyone knows the situation. I'm a complete beginner in terms of webnovel writing, so I'm not sure my abilities will be able to meet expectations but I appreciate any feedback and comments. Also my release schedule will probably be S,T,Th and bonus chapters if the feedback is good enough. Most importantly, I am a college student so I might not be able to upload some days, if that happens I will try to make up for it the next day. Thank you and I hope you enjoy the story!

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"Yeah. Even I saw girl's in western outfits in photos of senior's fresher's party," Tisya replied.

Young Master....? Wait! YOUNG MASTER!! He's young? Wait wait wait, wait a minute. Vincent has a child? Whoa, that just shocking. I didn't know that until now. Well, poor kid. Get to hold as the Heir of the Phantomhive at a young age must sucked. Even as a Queen Watch Dog. He must seen lots of deaths and blood.

As I wait I feel a weird energy from the moon still in the sky. I look upward toward the moon and my eyes go wide. I jump to the car as Rosy is about to get out and tell her to be quiet while pointing toward the moon lit sky. She looks up and I see the surprise in her eye's too. "I-is that a Dragon?!" We both stare up into the sky to see a enormous western Dragon. It was dark out so we couldn't see the color of it but it gave out a frightening presence and energy. From this distance the Dragon still looked enormous and it was very high in the sky. "ROOAAAARRRR!!!" It lets out a frighteningly mighty roar causing the air to vibrate with its strength. "GROOOOOAAAARRRRR!" We hear another roar accompanied by loud rumbling like rocks smashing into each other. I turn toward the city and I see the Rock Titan standing up and roaring towards the Dragon. "What the hell is happening?" The ground rumbles and suddenly an enormous piece of earth as big as a skyscraper is thrown into the sky.