Fun and well written. We can slowly see a plot developp past the numerous yet excellent -18 scenes π.The cultivation ranks are sensible and well organized, MC not too OP at the start.Really good, will make up for Mylittlebrother orendously expensive 'Dual cultivation' novel.
writing and grammer have a lot of problems. there is little to no character development. the story seems to just bounce around. it introduces new chars without really telling you who they are. the Mc is suppose to be the number 1 genius in his high end college but story doesn't really show his intelligence, more of a barbarian fighter. char is suppose to be a mage but only uses spells sometime most fights are him using 1 skill to one hit kill all bosses that out lvl him by 10+ levels. is the second person to get a gods blessing and become an apostle but the first person to is underpowered
I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I canβt get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what heβs been through.
Hehehehehe ππ. Hello, this is Eshwar, yes, this just another shameless author's review, but I didn't care π, I love this story even when it was only in my mind, I want a lot of people to read and enjoy this story, so I'll pour the entirety of my imagination into this novel, and do not compare it with any other stories (especially my other book, because my "writing" there and here are entirely different.) Hope you enjoy reading, thank you for reading and [Peace]
I've read just 6 chapters of this book and I can tell that it's gonna be fun and enjoyable for sure! It has a good opening, the more I read, the more intensely fun it got. And overall, it's quite entertaining, but on the other hand, I also think that the storyline is a little slow in progression, but not that bad. BTW, I will wait for the next updates :D
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