great story,the bad things that I think should be improve in the story is the mc intelligence, not a smart in not to stupid mc but sometime mc don't think enough or analysis more in certain situation so more failure hope it get better in the way the story progress and my personal problem is now he got a guide and there interaction in mc being dumb and I hate that, as a reader I want the mc to be smarter or use some thinking when he is talking to other people.
Magic setting in Alternate Universe Modern Earth gives it one of the best worldbuilding among most novels.MC has a cheat which gives him two Magic Systems (Fire and Thunder to start with) per magic cultivation rank compared to everyone who gets only one. Plus it has more functions to unlock!MC doesn't have a terrible personality - he works hard to train magic, flirts with girls, makes friendships, slaps faces... Everything you'd expect a Chinese xianxia-style MC to do.As a novel transmigrating from Gravity, if it gets per-day updates, it will be really popular.Plus it has a manhua and an anime, so there.Final rating: 10/10, would recommend.
This novel was really good, I like it but their conversation is really awful. I know you are a poet author but don't do this, you have a translator. I thought reading Machine translation but all in all good novel but still i really don't like being a poetic one its like kinda hypocrite doing like this.
Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more! 🙂
After Jun Liu and NaNa had their dinner, it was only half an hour after seven. Since the two of them were not sleepy, they say at the living room watching television.
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