The character's flat, the plot's as straight as highway through the prairie, the romance is bland, and the world building is a bad impressionist landscape with blobs of colours smeared to leave a distinctly vague idea of the subject of the painting.
Okay, I'm hooked with the synopsis. I can get that you've already have a great world background. It's a potential great shounen storyline, with lots of adventures. My only suggestions is about the description part, I find it difficult to understand, that some parts may be a bit confusing. I'll suggest the author to have some re-read or proofreading to make improvements.P.S. I would keep on reading, if I find something, I'll comment so you'll make improvements.Keep it up!!!
I enjoyed reading this, I think that the concept for the novel was good. The r18 scenes I think were well made. Good job author.Filling in space for reviews is so annoying, don't mind this.
Hello I hope you all like this novel, this novel is not a normal sent to another world type I hope to make the world and characters come alive and yo be cared for so if I need to fix anything please leave a review thank you all
It was a woman he saw, standing just below him by a few inches. Her body was bathed in a swath of white that reflected well the rays of the sun. Her clothing consisted of solely a transitional highcollared
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