It was machine translated novel but it is One of the best novel that i have read in sports category.Characters and the story was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great novel, people are traumatizing with cheat so they dislike but it's a new concept in webnovel, the only thing that I dislike is because the mc talk about business and money a lot but doesn't go for these things, I hope that changes later on.Can someone give me the raw?
Writing quality: Good! Little to no error.Good sentencing and paragraphing. Translator also explain the chinese reference.Story development: The premises is good but the delivery and execution is bad. Mc lack braincells sometimes...Character design: They're only so so. Like I said above, mc sometimes lack braincells. I hate the part even knowing that the hoe in the wh*re houe is using him and stuff, he still want to go there. There are some similar things but yeah....World background: Not bad, the premises like I said is interesting, not new but still rare. They're in a murim and a cultivation world together.Overall: I don't recommend investing yo ressources in this but if you want a quick read, sure go for it. It coulda been so much better if a lil bit more effort had gone into it but it is what it is
Good stuff right here very engaging from the get go and that's what I like! The world and characterss are well made and the writing is pretty good (as far as I'm concerned)All in all it's a good mystery story, keep it up Author!
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TLDR: solid story, interesting take on the relationship between gods (author clearly knows a lot about that stuff), A little glossy on the details about powers, but makes up for it with decent character development, overall funny without beating dead horses too much.feels a little rushed in story development at points but I can see it being fine if it takes the route I believe it will.i wish the author would update a wee bit more but as long as the posting stays consistent it's no big deal.
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