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Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review.
4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed.
So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals:
1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total)
2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun!
Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
And one more thing.
*Blooop!!!!* This is good.
The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories.
Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words.
The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking.
Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.
After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character.
He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference.
World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout.
In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
some cringy moments .
Not worthy a read.