It's a Great book. Honestly, has the potential to be top 100. If only you didn't put the paywall so soon, I'm sure more people would have picked it up. I was lucky that this book was offered to me for free for 24 hours, so I made it deep enough to actually be absorbed in the story. You should've leave the first 20 chapters to be free so reader can really get a taste of how it's going to be. Not to mention, you picked a very unique genre.Anyway on to the actual review,. I give you huge props on Story Development and Character Development. Granted when it comes to wrestling, I do enjoy the actual match itself rather than the buildup, so it's fun to see it from a different perspective.Your character development in Brent, Rob and Dacey is awesome, especially in the later chapter. And what I love the most is how 'weak' Rob is. He is a proper underdog that actually rising without a cheat but sheer hard work. Unconsciously, you made interesting conflicts that normally would've been pushed aside in this type of novels.Now is there a flaw?Maybe a bit slow. But in all fairness at Rob's current position, I do understand the extreme details Also good couple btw👍
The story was good, up until the point where Luna died. I was expecting something magical to save Luna from her illness; I skipped the chapters until I found out Luna actually died. Although I don’t want to drop this novel, it’s too depressing for my heart.
"Those two are some kind of VIP people, we can't attack them or else our life will be crushed. Boy, I don't recommend you intervene in their business, let just watch for now. We can't help her."
He ran back to the Servant Courtyard where he lived, his clothes had holes and were soaked in blood so he decided to take a bath and change clothes. He then sat on his bed and tried to cultivate the 5 Star Elephant Cultivation Technique, but nothing happened.
Popular Reviews