He snapped out of his daydream when he heard the boy's voice..."..Mr. King may be a Satan but he really has a great taste. The view of the city from here is mesmer....." Damien stopped hearing after he realised that the person who was being called Satan here was him....HIM..,sweet little him.....ok the statement was wrong hell it was a crime to speak his name and the words like sweet and little in the same sentence. He was well aware about how people thought about him and referred to him behind his back but this little guy surely had guts calling him names in his own office and on his face, alright not exactly but still....... was this guy too naive or an idiot that he didn't even notice his presence.
Honestly, I felt the world built and background is interesting, but need an improvements in writing area. Particularly, word choice needed to be refined in some areas. Flow of story is pretty engaging. Awaiting more chapters to read!.
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