I've read until chapter 120. So far the story is very intriguing and the characters are quite well developed. I do have some complains though. Constantine was very underwhelming. In history, he seemed a lot more proactive and strong willed. Here, he seems like a pessimist and weak willed person. He should be more active, trying to use his power and not let others control him. And to add insult to injury, he had to have a falling out with Antonius! He should be a hero even if he isn't the protagonist, not a lowly pawn. I really hope that you redeem him and not have Antonius have to overthrow him.As a sidenote, I hope that Antonius adopts Orthodoxy and that it doesn't submit to the Pope, or at least not for good or they try to unite the churches to the pre-schism status.Please, if you are willing to address my hopes and spoiling the story a little, I will greatly appreciate it!
has great potential, would like to be a bit more fast paced, but i think the author already knows that and that is his decision in the end. btw cai zhenkang it just the best as character, dude is jokes
Alright, this small review is needed for reader that are about to approach the book. You aren't convinced at all by the uninformative synopsis, and even at the cost of minor spoiler want to know more about it.You already now that I'm a newbie author and English is not my main language. However you shouldn't be having many problems in understanding my writing, since many others already read the book.Still beware that the first ten chapters might be tough to read.SPOILERS AHEAD(not much though)Now who exactly is Xeno, he started off as weak being obliged to work hard every day to survive. An incident suddenly happens, death is slowly approaching him. To save his life he will accept an offer from a mysterious being, changing himself completely.Received a new body, Xeno becomes another kind of existence entirely, a more powerful and dangerous one.Yet what he believed to be true strength, will demonstrate to be weakness once again.However he chose not to abandon himself, but to keep believing in his convinctions. From here only the truly evil lies ahead. The ruthlessness necessary to shape everything in his path, for himself and the ones he holds dear. I hope you know have a more clear opinion about what to expect from the book.Disclaimer:Beware 'hold dear' does not mean romance, because he won't consoder anyone in a romantic way.
I just wanted to say that I really love your book, thanks so much for updating, your book is the best so far i have read, if i could actually pay for this, I won't mind spending every last penny of dollars i have left in my pocket! This book is a bomb! And i hope it gets recognized with success! 👋
Really love what the earlier chapters set up! Love the character design, love the world and love the whole overall lore! Interesting characters in Jack and Zick, and seeing a great story moving forward!
Interesting start. I am curious about the mysterious girl's identity.A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war.The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters.Overall, great job!
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