Very well thaught out, the ***** scenes are not the plot but are part of the development. Battle and character development are well paced and placed. Keep it up!
Heres my review after reading though the latest chapter...
Overall this story is still in its eariler stages, but shows great potential. The MC as of now dosent quite have a clear goal, but given what ive read the author will given him sufficent motivation that any reader can accept and look forward to read for many chapters to come.
In regards to romance/ harem its well thought and feels natural given the MCs circumstances he is put though for his different members. An example, the MC's first girl after waking up in his new bodyhe discovers already has feelings for him. He on the other hand just left his previous girlfirend and is conflicted on how to approach the situation. To top it off the previous "owners" feelings are still there and are there to stay. Now ask yourself if you were in his shoes knowing you wont see your previous girl, theres a new girl in front of you that has no flaws you can think what would you do? The world wont bend to your whim just because you still have lingering feelings. Naturally you must adapt given the curent situation and make the most of it.
The cultivation system so far is well thought out and leaves room for growth. At the beginning it might be slower then some other stories so bare with it.
I hope after reading it you decide to give it a go. 104 chapters are free to read so read those first before making a hasty desicion on weher you like this novel or not..
You shouldn't get fooled by the low number of chapters. The current 182 chapters are like 400 chapters from ordinary chinese novels, because of the lack of fillers and tedious lengthy descriptions.
There is literally nothing I can complain about this novel. I really like the cultivation system, I like the characters, I like the world building, I like the writting style, I like the romance and I like the story :D
I read countless chinese novels, but there are always multiple things I didn't like or utterly hated. This is the first time I found a flawless gem.
It doesn't mean this is the best novel out there (maybe it could be in the future), but up until now it gave me always a good feeling, while reading it.
It is even good enough for getting from today onwards 3 Power Stones daily ;)
Authors writing quality and story development is good, but there is this one single flaw that makes this novel so annoying to read, its about MC.
Everytime there is a fight someone from his harem stands up to fight then get clapped and them he will go "I WILL KILL YOU" and let his other wifes beat the guy off, and make that annoying heroic speech.
Truly one of the great novels on this, or any, web novel style site. Piokilek’s mastery of weaving a deep and meaningful story with well developed characters is a tribute to his abilities as an up and coming professional novelist. This was my first experience with his writing style, and I can state with confidence that each of his other novels are as well developed as this story.
If you like harem novels with a great cast of characters, or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story about Xuefeng and his strong and beautiful women. The story grabs you and pulls your heartstrings from the very beginning.
My one and only regret about this Novel. Is knowing it existed this early.........urghhh.......why this happen to me?..........I wished I came across this months later.....not now......then I'd have lots of chapters Available....... I should have just minded my own business....... Sadly animals die in pursuit of Food......and people like me die at cliffhangers.......
With all that said. I love how our great Author-Sensei made the Mc. Someone with common Sense and not arrogant. The female characters have their own personality. Not just some puppets. Hopefully we'll see more development with them in future chapters! Keep Up the Good Work!
Shameless 5 star review because i think you have to be proud of anything you are doing.....S...h...a...m...e...l...e...s...s........P...i...o...k...i...l...e...k
Honestly, i didnt think much. What grabbed me for a moments time was the title. Figure I’d read a few chapters an most likely not like it an move on. But before I knew it. I had read all the chapters. Hellish good read, read them all in 1 sitting.
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Overall this story is still in its eariler stages, but shows great potential. The MC as of now dosent quite have a clear goal, but given what ive read the author will given him sufficent motivation that any reader can accept and look forward to read for many chapters to come.
In regards to romance/ harem its well thought and feels natural given the MCs circumstances he is put though for his different members. An example, the MC's first girl after waking up in his new bodyhe discovers already has feelings for him. He on the other hand just left his previous girlfirend and is conflicted on how to approach the situation. To top it off the previous "owners" feelings are still there and are there to stay. Now ask yourself if you were in his shoes knowing you wont see your previous girl, theres a new girl in front of you that has no flaws you can think what would you do? The world wont bend to your whim just because you still have lingering feelings. Naturally you must adapt given the curent situation and make the most of it.
The cultivation system so far is well thought out and leaves room for growth. At the beginning it might be slower then some other stories so bare with it.
I hope after reading it you decide to give it a go. 104 chapters are free to read so read those first before making a hasty desicion on weher you like this novel or not..
There is literally nothing I can complain about this novel. I really like the cultivation system, I like the characters, I like the world building, I like the writting style, I like the romance and I like the story :D
I read countless chinese novels, but there are always multiple things I didn't like or utterly hated. This is the first time I found a flawless gem.
It doesn't mean this is the best novel out there (maybe it could be in the future), but up until now it gave me always a good feeling, while reading it.
It is even good enough for getting from today onwards 3 Power Stones daily ;)
Everytime there is a fight someone from his harem stands up to fight then get clapped and them he will go "I WILL KILL YOU" and let his other wifes beat the guy off, and make that annoying heroic speech.
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If you like harem novels with a great cast of characters, or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story about Xuefeng and his strong and beautiful women. The story grabs you and pulls your heartstrings from the very beginning.
With all that said. I love how our great Author-Sensei made the Mc. Someone with common Sense and not arrogant. The female characters have their own personality. Not just some puppets. Hopefully we'll see more development with them in future chapters! Keep Up the Good Work!