just garbage, excluding the fact the novel goes premium at 20 chaps the english of the author is horrendous. the plot doesn't make sense and the novel doesn't spark any kind of excitement! you had plenty of time to make this good but you didn't, sorry if English isn't your first language.
If you create a MC that will make full use of a system, and show us his status, you better keep the scores consistent. And since you don't care to correct yourself, either for your MC status or your many grammar / orthography mistakes, then I will go back to other titles.Those are sometimes a bit more negatively minded, but at least they don't drive me nuts with major inconsistencies.
Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one
It's hard to rate books that are still ongoing and there is no end in sight, but it's a pleasant story with slowly dripped mystery element nicely woven in there. I'd like to see the end game of this story, because my initial thoughts and fears of cliches were all shattered. Now I just...
Soon The pain went away. His pace was slow so I started jumping up and down bouncing as I gripped onto my breast widening my thigh a little more. He held onto my waist to support me. I leaned back with my hand on the bed. I looked at him as I bit my lips.
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