Space Mage of the Qi World

This is my first time writing a novel, if there is any mistakes or something you would like to add.
Please write it down below in the comments!
Much thanks, have a nice day!

I don't usually read revenge novels as the MC always seem to either fall in love or form a harem, which defeats the character of a cold, ruthless MC ruins the story, but I'm glad this revenge plot have neither!

It has great potential... I cant wait for more chapters to be released. It can be a Gem and compete with top novels if the development is done well.

I'm giving a perfect score coz i love you
apparently i need to have 140 characters sooo
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It has a great protentia I love you much much more much mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuccchhhhhhh I can't wait for more chapter.,................. Love this blablablablablanlablanlablablablanlablablablablablabla

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.