Crap translation quality. Generic story. Lack of character development. Poor story overall. Biggest problem is definitely the translation quality. Multiple grammatical and spelling errors.
This is one of the good kingdom building novels I have read it's amazing in that the mc start from scratch with nothing but a title in a desolate place, its interesting to see his progress and the realization of how he can lose everything with a single mistake in judgment. This novel puts in two of the best elements of fantasy fiction which are kingdom building and systems, this novel won't disappoint anyone who tries it.
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Possibly one of the worst novels I have ever read. it makes me want to cry my self to sleep from the pain, but yet stay awake and suffer. I hate it, it lied to me. It wasted my lifespan it stole from me. I deserve to be paid for this. I need compensation. I have suffered
I don’t like cultivating books but this one is pretty good read 25 chaps so far and it is in good progression very smooth and not like other that are dark and kill kill kill some more it’s pretty good casual read
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
So it tool me a minute, but there isn't much for me to critique on the story per say. I will praise the world building in this world. I am a fan of it as well as the power system in this story. I am highly optimistic for the future clashes using the system and the type of challenges that our ML faces.
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