What!! I can rate my own novel. Hehehe... then 5 stars it is.
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I really like your novel, i am not a native but i think your english is good. Nice story,detailed background, your mc is what it should be,not ***** and always thinking till the detail. A bit of slow but interesting. Overall the story is good. I appreciate your work. Keep it up . Thanks for the chap and nice job
I adore this the only thing I find off putting is it's pacing BUT the pacing it has is more than made up for in quality if I had money I can say with confidence that I'd pay $1000 for 100 chapters just from the sheer enjoyment I gain even from "filler" chapters. I hope the author continues this art (^_^). I'm currently waiting till I have 10 or so chapters saved up because I personally enjoy binging this of course it's akin to a 10 min bing at MOST if it's the relatively more wordy chapter but the euphoria I gain makes my day.
man story is good but there are two problems mc is growing too slowly i will say how can he be mc with such slow growth he thinks too much. .. 2nd is story is like fillers real content is very less all chapter are like fillers and nothing. . if you want to level up quality of novel make mc growth acceptable not fast but not too much slow as now or how can he survive and give main content then filler which is happening now
I like the novel and it seems likebsomerhing I can get into, but I am having a hard time getting around the massive amount of information. I kinda reminds me of reading lord of the rings I ended up skipping sections because it wasn't really relevant.
slow mc powerup + slow plot development + original fic w/o multiple daily updates = fic that will probably be dropped or delayed before getting finished. May as well read a translated novel - at least there are more chapters and faster update
sorry man, but you should work more on your pacing. The first chapter was great for an opening, but for the next 5 chapters, it was like reading the same thing over and over again.
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