This novel is amazing. I am so glad I saw this while browsing novels. This has a good storyline. I am also getting some undertones from stardew valley which I’m liking. Thanks for this novel and I am hoping for more.
Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point.
I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy.
There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better.
The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.
Finally, I managed to found a worthwhile farming novel to read. Love the HM reference for the chickens. Put a smile on my face. Keep up the good work. Just a note and you may already know this. The official successor to Bokujo Monogatari is Story of Seasons. The HM Lights of Hope is no longer bokujo. SoS may be another outlet of inspiration for you.
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The story was nice...
The ML has a very good moral character and I like the fact that he made time to be with his family especially his little sister, the moments of them eating ice cream was a joy to read...
I enjoy the story for what it is. It's not the best spelling and sentence structure but the Author is not a native English speaker so it's forgiven that the language is substandard. I enjoy that the story is more laid back and that overall it's more enjoyable and I bet after some time the grammar and structure will improve after all practice makes perfect. I recommend this to people who can understand what the author is trying to convey and maybe help out with positive comments and tips.
I'm at chapter 16 but I'm already recommending this to everyone. It's very nice with with the family relationship and farming which I love. Hehehe. Keep it up!!!
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OK where do I start from...... hmmmm.
Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point.
I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy.
There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better.
The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.
The ML has a very good moral character and I like the fact that he made time to be with his family especially his little sister, the moments of them eating ice cream was a joy to read...
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