A wonderful and well-written novel. The grammar was great as the sentences flowed nicely! As for the story, it was all well thought and unique compared to most novels on this site. This uniqueness would definitely pay in the long run.
Hope you the best, the novel would be added to my library.
The way that the author description is very unique and indeed flawless. There's not much to go on about here. Reader, you won't be regretting your choice in choosing to read this book.
Your details are impeccable and your story line is great. You have a true talent for writing ; I look forward to reading more of your novels. I have thoroughly enjoyed your book. ❤️❤️❤️
So far, I have greatly been enjoying this novel. The characters aren't your typical "smart" mc's that do the dumbest crap possible. Instead, they actually plan ahead and consider what they're doing. Any mistakes they make are usually because they are still immature children, or because of their limited worldview. They aren't arrogant, as they know there are likely people with more talent than them, while also not being overly humble, as they still easily destroy opponents when necessary. Their advantage in combat makes sense, since who the hell would be expecting a human to fight like a beast?
My one singular gripe is that the worldbuilding seems kind of basic, and a lot of stuff that is introduced is just kind of abandoned, with no later mention.
Asides from that, five stars in everything, I would absolutely recommend this to anyone trying to read a good Wuxia novel, then I'd solidly recommend this one.
Great book with very well developed characters and plot which a clear path and goal for all character to work towards. Overall a very good read, thanks author.
Interesting story. I love the family bond and Hei being the dutiful big bro. I don't know cultivation or generally read it, so this was new to me. The story isn't guns blazing, but the pace is logical and flows well. Well written with interesting characters. Could do really well here.
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Hope you the best, the novel would be added to my library.
My one singular gripe is that the worldbuilding seems kind of basic, and a lot of stuff that is introduced is just kind of abandoned, with no later mention.
Asides from that, five stars in everything, I would absolutely recommend this to anyone trying to read a good Wuxia novel, then I'd solidly recommend this one.