Was a really great book untill about chapter 27 when it turned into generic crap. Really disappointing as i was really enjoying the story so far but they had to go and ruin it.
Like the plot of this story... like the fl.. but as i keep on reading.. i kind of like give me more i want more.. i mean i fell like theres something missing.. the chapter are short i think..
Story itself isn't that bad. It's set in Modern Times, yet there's really nothing Modern about it. We don't know why the MC likes carrots so much. So the story feels forced
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Honestly was looking forward to read this but was turn off by the bad writing. I've only read the first few chapters but I couldn't continue anymore even though I liked the story. It feels like it's lazily translated. Author needs to work on his writing.
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