So Not Guilty, Mr. FBI

Eh, so far, I’ve read half of what has been written, and the main character is still a little boy, only 8 years old. The story is okay, but not great. Kinda weird that there’s so much sexual stuff going on with a little kid. I like that he’s leveling up as a mage and what not, but, I just wish he was older faster. The story is well written otherwise for the most part, it is slowly progressing. Not sure if I want to invest in it since it’s going a little slow. Gonna look at some other stories for now.

I am excited about what the future holds for this novel.  Hope, budding love, despair, I don’t know what the plot is going to throw next at me

Read up to chapter 28 so far it’s a good book but need some polishing you have a lot of repeat paragraphs and not everything needs a description example main character says something and next sentence is low but sharp tone. I would get it if it was every once in a while but it’s after every conversation there’s no need for that

A masterpiece for the beginning and until now the level has not dropped and it is still a bite. I am really impressed.If I have to say then this hero is really my favorite type as he has all the qualities of the best heroes I mean evil, manipulation, intelligence and finally immorality