Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story.

Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.

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dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . .
you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . .
I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . .
aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us

This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.

I started reading but found it difficult due to the words not being used or structured right, you can get the jist of what your trying to say in it but it is difficult to read the English, I hope you can reread and fix them or get someone who can proof read your work before hand might help.

We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his  creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation!

I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests.

I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.

it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.

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