It's interesting despite being yet another system novel and the world setting in unique too. There are no issues with grammar that I have noticed either.
My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.
Very good concept, but I can see that author is not really exploiting all the potential yet, it is good to have fights scenes but it is not so good when the fight scene is dragged out and logically it could have ended sooner and carried on but it did not. In my opinion, there is a lot of information that does not matter or affect the story in any way so author should reconsider to make the flow better without boring chapters.
The story is good and the steal function is great. Hopefully he won't turn into a degenerate and start stealing pan***s like a certain character. At some points the story extension seemed unnecessary; just to reach a certain word limit. It could be more concise and still be good in those parts.
dont know if i can still get that free 5xp i hope i do here is a shameless review im here to read the novel so i hope it really is worth the 5 star im giving
I'd love to give this wonderful author a 5/5, however there haven't been any new chapters for those of us without money to spend on coins in awhile. Waiting for more.
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