The doo Fly me to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at like
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Author has been consistently delivering quality work. Although the fanfic has been interesting from the very start, it became much more interesting as the story progresses especially the latest chapters. I did not expect the author to deliver a work which can even match the quality of the original. Overall a very good book. 100% Recommended read.
The writing quality is great nothing wrong with that. Everything is perfect so far and I hope that perfectness stays forever. I love the plot— heck I’m jealous by how good it is. Keep working hard author, this is a potential one can’t deny.
I'm a sucker for this novel, yes the translation sucks ash, yes a repetitive story formula is used for a very long time for a great part of the novel, and yes there is a lack of very complicated and interesting normal plotlines, and yes a lot of the character design feels bad as a lot of characters are left behind or are not expanded on, despite all these bad things ever since the novel's character turned into an immortal or a little before that has the novel seen some improvements in the writing (not translation), the author has learned how to add variety and subvert his writing structure for the plot, a lot more characters are relevant for much longer periods of time and have their own interesting details and secrets, the MC is still very careful but he is not afraid of showing his strength to get more opportunities and he is responsible, he has been helping his sect with management and with resources, one of my most favorite parts although not an improvement is that the author knows how to leave mysteries as mysteries to interest the reader and excite them with the reveal, some mysteries that have been set up include what the heck the Daqian emperor is doing post Yu Heng World, where is Bai Cliff, why the Wisdom Realm only wants to fight against Daluo, what the heck the Blazing Flame Tao Court Wants, what is the sword inside the Green Reed Sword's treasure space/ spirit realm, who killed the Green Reed Sword's previous owner, what sword did the Age Candle Ancestor fight against and what did it do to receive such spite, what is up with the immortal puppet Yuan Shuan brought back, who messed with the Dao for the ancient god system, what is the systems connection to the Wisdom Realm's master and what does it mean for Han Yi to have the blessings of multiple worlds and having the protection of a powerful being guarding his fate ..................why did I write so much,just feeling lonely I'm the only commenter on the later chapters
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