Hello all authors. Please stop writing children protagonists into stories clearly designed for adult leads (or at the very least somewhat adult-late teens). Anime and japanese light novels influenced and ruined an entire generation of what could have been amazing writers. At no point does it make sense in this novel, nor in 99% of other CP novels. Ruins the entire reading expericence and decimates any form of immersion.
Really bad, no plot or interesting scenarios plus quiet a few scenarios are exactly the same as in "First Day in game, i got ten billion from infinite number of check ins". Not sure who copied whom but I dropped the other one too lol
If the MC wasn't a toddler it would have been a 2/5. The story is bad, made even worse by the illogical age of the protagonist. Not a single aspect of this story makes sense in any capacity, nor is it fun to read about a prepubescent child doing what he is doing here. The author needs to be institutionalized.
Dont read here and spend your money on this book. You are just being ripped off by this disgusting translator. Take note, the current latest chapter of this novel is Chapter 208, that is in premium. I have checked the raws and chapter 208 is different. In the raws, what is shown in chapter 208 is in chapter 135. You are not getting your money's worth for the chapter purhases. This is blatant riff off.
There are several types of stories out on Webnovel. This type is both stupid and extremely reality bending. System stories that give rewards that include ownership of cars, houses, businesses, ect..., are plain absurd. In most cases the absurdity ruins the story for me. Here we start with an absurd MC who is 8, which tells the audience that the story is supposed to be absurd. Instead of pretending to be a serious modern system story with semi-realistic characters and a bunch of romance and face-slapping, we have it taken from the direction of a spoof. This is not meant to be taken seriously at all. It has all the bad modern reward system story methods, but because the MC is an 8y old it changes it from painful to stupid/funny.
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