As a newbie, the author has done a tremendous job. Just read few chapters and I am hooked to it. It is truly an amazing read. From what I read, this novel is like a sun ray in a sky filled with dark clouds. The descriptions, plots, characters everything is really good, except some errors, but those can be edited later. I would surely recommend this novel anyone who enjoys reading fantasy novels, just like me😉
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The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me😅.But there are quite a few problems. Hope you don't get me wrong. I kindly wish you to correct some grammatical issues in your writing. And keeping multiple dialogues of multiple characters together in a single passage could impact the reader (saw it on a review for another work ages ago)Otherwise, it's a good story and has some strong characters with great potential. All the best🤞
Would not reccomend, the author slapped the villain tag in there for 0 reason the mc is as heroic as you can find, justifies every action and and the whole schtick anyway I would beacon the author to remove the villain tag as it is false advertisement and leads to disappointed viewers and this is review is soley for other readers to enjoy villain mc novels ti read not to announce my departure to the auhtor and he should in no way be dissapointed that he lost a reader I just want to request the author drop the villain tag as I was highly dissapointed and don’t want others to feel the same
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