a very fun and action-packed story that is exactly what I wanted to read. the only qualm is the periodic lapse in updating, but they are completely understandable due to the author having a sperate life; and the troubles within said life.
I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.
Nice title ..nice story.. but the author needs to work on how he present.. his/her narration.. it's exhausting when the me is always confused, thinking on necessry things..there is a simple thing I would always like authors to consider . try and imagine yourself in a situation.. then ask another person how he will react.. you will notice . reality and fallacy are World apart .
This story is one that i would like more if. I really hope it continues to progress. Author keep up the great work. I need more story. The only draw back is that we do not see enough of the merging of two lives. How is it going to work? I need to know more please
Naruto opened his eyes. He has been trying to enter sage mode since half an hour ago but there's still no progress whatsoever. The only chance he got to track down Hinata's kidnapper is by using his sage mode to detect Hinata's chakra signature. However Naruto was racing against time because the further they took Hinata away, the harder it would be for Naruto to track her.
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