Shadows of Revenge

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

"But I haven't done anything!" the girl cried out.

     My name isn't Carl, you fool. They named us as they want, what do they think we are?

this is a verry cool story but it needs more work ,why did you kill the mc just to bring him back, and why is their an oncalled for time skip?

Good setting and pacing. It's also engaging and unique. Nice few chapters in, so continue updating.

Well…….Not bad for an amateur……..I guess

God I feel like crying. Why didn't I find this first than the other? . Well, I think I'll delete the review I made on the other version. PS: Author, it would be a good idea if in the NTR version you put in the synopsis that says that you have a version without NTR. It would have helped me a lot    :´´v. Please update often..

This is really artistic, slow pacing but amazing. It's interesting.....