The story is well made despite the fact that it is an area where a lot of people made original or fan novels this is seriously full of originality.Good work and just some effort for the typos and stuff !
I am actually really impressed by this story. Your style inspires me actually even though it is kinda hard hard writing in the tense you use, but you managed to nail that so points for that. There is a few grammatical errors, but only picky people would comment on that since your style and events cover all that ish up. Keep going, I love this, and you a great author! Also I am waiting for more to come!!
I'm about to do what's called a pro gamer move *laughs evilly*Okay but seriously, this is my first novel and I'm still inexperienced if you have any advice or critics(good or bad) feel free to tell. Thanks in advance
This story is alright but it’s quite interesting for me. I would really like to see this get chosen although not as good as Game of life or apocalypse forecast it’s still a solid story compared to some of the other trial read books. Man am depressed that those two didn’t get picked but hey what can you do am I right? Anyway I hope those of you with coins could invest some here so it can be picked, it’s really a interesting concept.
great start of novel. good character development. though one thing is that there are some cliche scenes. he says he would mind his business but he still goes out of his way to save others.other than character personality everything is good thanks for the novel.
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