Well, I am speechless. I must say I am impressed with the author's work. Even for the self-same country that we lived in. And so, I can say that the author is not an ordinary one or a newbie. This is the kind of novel that I would like to binge read. All in all, kudos for a job well done. More chapters await me....... [img=recommend]
The overall design of the characters, world background and pacing of the story so far has been executed pretty well so far. Although, the author has made quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes throughout the story. For example, some words hv been spelt wrong or repeated (e.g. it was the the book or helpo). Now, It’s up to author to go back and fix this. To leave this review on a good note, the stability of chapters seem to be very consistent with every chapter filled with detailed descriptions enabling the readers to visualise every scene. Hope this review serves not only as a way to improve yourself, but also motivate you. Good luck on your book! [img=recommend]
good novel!! 4 of my favourite tags although the world background is not that good, it is average and the mc is one of my favourite types so please dont drop this gem and keep countinuing it!also the writing quality is awesome too
Amazing story so far. It is well written and had interesting characters. There are a couple grammatical errors where the word he is used for a female character but this doesn't take away from the story in a massive way. I would highly recommend the story.
This is a total cool OP story. i actually hate most OP stories but here the MC...let's just say I don't mind it. Anyways, the world building is very unique and the best thing in this story. It's a lot like Overlord type of setting but without the game like vibe. Just real life
I still can't understand why you decided to rewrite this story and change it when the other version was good but okay, well this is pretty good but not my liking.
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