Shades of the New World

I think that the story has a god passing, and when they talk about thing like gore it is chill and not over dramatic and I like how they make past event have something to do with future events.

Honestly, I read the first few paragraphs and I was instantly hooked. Hahah. And after reading it a bit more, I decided to add it to my reading list.
Let me start off by saying that the writing style got me immersed in the story. The world building is very well thought out and most of the characters are memorable. Not very often do I encounter a novel with a good world building.
Great job, author! Thank you for this novel :)

im confused. idk if i should be impressed by the quality of writing, the number of chapters, the plot, the characters, the tension or the folds of problems the mc faces in his life the big and the small, everything, paced perfectly and woah so many chapters! THE ONLY OFFPUTTING THING HERE WAS THAT SASHA'S PRONOUNS KEEP SWITCHING FROM HE AND SHE IN CHAPTER 3 I THINK idk please correct that, adding to my library to continue reading further till my broke ass retrieves coinsss hehe [img=recommend][img=update][img=fp][img=coins]

I think this is one of the webnovels that is going to be really, really popular very soon. Clean, clear writing for the most part and the pacing is spot-on in the goldilocks zone of giving enough detail to be tantalizing without being overwhelming. Also, has a lot of forward momentum with the pacing and leaving hooks at the end of chapters. I'm a sucker for world-building and not-OP MC, so this is exactly the type of read that will hook me.

One writing habit to keep an eye on is duplication of transition words within sentences (such as using 'But' to lead-off the sentence, and then also as the midpoint), and keeping up variability with modifiers.

I'm glad I found this one now, because there is enough content to binge-read in the coming weeks.  :)

sometimes life is very mean: a person can spend days, weeks, months and years w/out feeling anything new. Then, when a door opens - a positive avalanche pours in. One moment, you have nothing, the next, you have more than you can cope with..
keep going

This book is great!
(I am trying to get free chapters)!
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This is an entertaining read, with well thought out characters and world. i like that it pushed the limits of the conventional expectations explores contemporary elements

Super interesting plot, to be honest. I felt quite curious about all the character - each one of them very well written! I love the story and the way you describe it, making it so easy to imagine! Any reader would get hooked from the very beginning. Love it!