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Honestly, I was hoping for more from this story. I generally enjoy the cliche of a weakling getting a cheat and becoming powerful. But this story is just mediocre as of chapter 60. Maybe it gets better later on, but I havenβt looked at any reviews from other people, so I donβt know.The translation / editing quality seems to be excellent (very few or no English grammar or spelling mistakes). I canβt speak to the translation accuracy, but the story flows and is coherent. 5/5.The story itself, however, is just meh. The pacing feels rushed. The elders have the same cultivation strength as some inner disciples. Etc etc. 2.5/5.Overall, 3.5/5. It is readable and can help pass the time, but there are tons of other web novels that are more enjoyable to me, so I wonβt be voting for this one.
Okay. So far the story has been awesome but i just finished reading chapter 108 and was thrown for a loop. Either there are missing chapters or they are out of order. Can someone please tell me the correct order to read or can author please fix it? Cause it goes from waking up in one chapter to fighting an ogre in the next. Other than this small hiccup, it has been a great novel.
Very interesting story so far. The author has only briefly covered farming so far (at chapter 9 atm) but the world he has created and the story itself has me quite excited to see where this goes.
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