Author, I’m curious, does the mc hate Vera or something? How come she is left out of everything? He doesn’t say goodbye to her, and hasn’t added her to his friends list despite being a person he interacts with quite often?
This is the third or forth time I've tried to get into this story, but again the bad grammar and characters etc. have kept me from getting past the first few chapters.This is a shame because there seem to be some interesting ideas that I'd love to read about.9 months ago as of writing this review the Author said that they were going to proofread/edit the start of the novel. Either this hasnt happened or they havent quite done a good enough job.Overall, a story with interesting ideas, but poor execution lets it down especially when compared to a few of the other system novels.
The poor children in the heat i didnt get that far in the story but the start is good and sad but good but i still wonder is he going to save that one girl from that thing or jist die there and not save her i am not sure if she lives or dies because i just read the info but i did read the story well the beginning☺
I've been waiting for another misunderstanding novel to show up since my last one just ended so abruptly. This one is starting slow, but it's so interesting!
Love the story line absolutely hilarious, my only complaint is there is some grammatical errors, but they aren't terrible, otherwise I don't think I've ever laughed so much about a man in a chicken costume kicking arse
Ok, so here is a little review (~15chapters)•Writting Quality/ is definitely top class with decent word building and grammar. •Character Design/ I would some of the things I liked about this novel, it's good and author has done a wonderful job by fleshing out the side characters. •Story development/ a bit slow but there are many novels a lot slower than it so I think author is doing good by maintaining quality even if it meant slow development. •MC/ @#*#@$$*#@$(not gonna tell)anyway this a good read and if the quality is maintained as such I have no doubt that it will become one of the top works on this platform.4.5/5Keep up the good work author.
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