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Is a pretty good book if u can deal with the unstability of posting, but a good book nonetheless.I really love how she takes a turn past chapter 40, because that made it a whole lot new story.
I never expected to find such a rollercoaster of laughter in a story about undead getting bored and trying out something new, give it a try, and decide for yourself 😉 ! The writing kept me drooling for more, the author knows what he's doing and I'm impatient to keep reading 😁
A beautiful cover page! I really like the black and white tone that gives the cover its character. A nicely written story. The plot is intriguing, the characters are expressive, with interesting descriptions and well-written dialogues. Well done!
The first chapter was really intrriguing, I liked it a lot. The only thing I would improve are the thoughts. Sometimes you wrote:‘...’And sometimes you just wrote:Atleast he didn’t...he thought.Just clarify how you want to say your characters are thinking as it will get a little bit confusing if you don’t.Other than that, the chapter is nicely written. t may lack a little bit of emotion but that’s just how I see it. You can imagine the characters well and how they act. You have a pretty clear view of them but still not much knowledge which I personally like because you reveal things step by step and don’t slam it into the readers face.Overall a reat book! Very recommendable😊
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