Secret of heart -betrayal

An interesting start, you are good at describing and creating scenes and atmosphere. I enjoyed what you have written so far.

The noval is pretty good. We follow the MC as he develop, learn, and build himself. I guess I gave it low rating because the main plot still isn't clear to me until now (ch238). I can see that the author is building the MC and the others. But until now isn't giving enogh answers to questions about where is the is novel going. Great Mech battels, that is not enogh.

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This is too funny if you are someone who can read without taking things seriously you are guaranteed a good laugh this one made me tear up this needs to get picked!

I ONLY READ WHAT THE BOOK IS ABOUT AND ITS STUPID!! Y WOULD ANYONE READ A BOOK ABOUT SOMEONE ONLY SUMMING A SCARECROW??? ITS ONE OF TUE STUPIDEST TH9S 8 HEARD OF!!!!

This is one of the best novels I have read its only problem is the low chapter release so far I am only chapter 20 I hope the novel continues this way and please increase the number of words per chapter

I've read to chapter 36 so far. you know alot of people might not like this novel because of the slow pace compared to other trial reads but it's actually pretty interesting. we do not know much about the world yet but we know that the mc is not in a game but in a different world type situation. The mc is smart but not evil like in many novels. I really look forward to see where this novel goes.

Honestly this is boring nothing more to be said...