This novel is absolutely phenomenal!
Each character has such intricate details, and the author does a really good job portraying their individual personalities! (And the “Pokémon-catching” of MC’s lovers honestly isn’t as cringingly quick as most novels, and it is somewhat sensible.)
The backstory of the main character & his sister was pulled off really well, and the MC’s & Layla’s subsequent resulting personalities have legitimate justification.
1. Amazing writing quality! Hardly any grammatical errors.
2. Pretty good update stability! It’s pretty stable, I just wish there was more!
Alright, a review. Sure. I will rate this honestly and say, there is for now, basically no world background. It is something that will be done in the future.
Characters: for now, we have a reason behind what characters do and so, they are fleshed out. I wouldn’t Give this a perfect score but it’s not bad for now.
Plot: hmm, difficult. I am not exactly sure what the plot is, but from what I read, it’s About the MC and his psychopathic tendencies That require him to kill people, which he does in nice ways for now. I especially like the torture moments.
Writing quality: some grammar mistakes might appear, but I will try to make sure Noworry releases no mistakes as much as possible. In short: trust my editorial And proofreading skills.
The characters so far are great and so is the novel but I think it would be more interesting if we had a little bit more exposition of the world as we've basically heard nothing about it. The writing quality has been great so far though you shouldn't give up easily.
Started off great, built great expectations, struggled to meet the expectations. Went up the hill and nose dived straight into a trash bin. In all the ending is total and utter trash.
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You can already guess from the synopsis that this novel is a thriller, but with the catch of superpowers that will come in handy for MC.
MC is smart, but he will be selfish and evil, so expect him to do unexpected things.
I don't know what else to say, so I will end it here.
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Each character has such intricate details, and the author does a really good job portraying their individual personalities! (And the “Pokémon-catching” of MC’s lovers honestly isn’t as cringingly quick as most novels, and it is somewhat sensible.)
The backstory of the main character & his sister was pulled off really well, and the MC’s & Layla’s subsequent resulting personalities have legitimate justification.
1. Amazing writing quality! Hardly any grammatical errors.
2. Pretty good update stability! It’s pretty stable, I just wish there was more!
Also, it’s like the author completely forgot about the MC’s other women…
Characters: for now, we have a reason behind what characters do and so, they are fleshed out. I wouldn’t Give this a perfect score but it’s not bad for now.
Plot: hmm, difficult. I am not exactly sure what the plot is, but from what I read, it’s About the MC and his psychopathic tendencies That require him to kill people, which he does in nice ways for now. I especially like the torture moments.
Writing quality: some grammar mistakes might appear, but I will try to make sure Noworry releases no mistakes as much as possible. In short: trust my editorial And proofreading skills.