I like the amount of detail given in the book. The story also progresses in a smooth and interesting manner. It also has a lot of interesting characters that make it a compelling read.
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It's a good story so far. The story development is interesting, as is the character design and world background. The main character has a good head on his shoulders, and seems to have real life abilities that he can transfer into the game. Good job.
Even though I only read a few chapters, i can easily say that your story is very interesting and has a lot of potential in it. I find the plot intriguing and am quite curious about the characters. Anxiously waiting for what will happen in the future! Keep on writing! :D
I like the concept and adore VRMMORPGs. I can see the potential and would love to see the MC being smart and having smart schemes. All in all there is good potential so you should have a read and see for yourself!
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