All in all one of the best reads I have ever had the pleasure of spending time on.... However the only thing I have complaints about is the ending. It feels as though the author just gave up at the end and took the lazy way out of having to write anymore. but other than that an absolute blast of a read!
21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff.Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good.Good story development (5).Background (4) build-up is good-ish.Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thouCharacters (4)-Nice backgrounds for someEnjoyed reading :) (+1 in translation quality)
It's me the author. Looks how pathetic I'm write the review to myself. Well I just to make the review, so problaly someone can read it. You know probably my chance story to show up on your screen become bigger.By Author.Well I hope you can write the review for me
Pure trash no matter how you look at it. Even if you can look past the poor translation and the over use of idioms the MC is about as consistent as Rick James on coke. "I want to keep a low profile" and immediately gets involved with a piece of sheet (grapist and lair by disregarding the deal made just the day before) that somehow he befriends on some Chinese level logic.
Jason awakened with a jolt. He appeared back into his apartment the Tome outstretched before him as if mocking him. The Tome was open its pages still flipping as if it was waiting for Jason to pick a path not knowing that he had just been bestowed the greatest path there was for a vampire.
The moment he did it, all the chakra in Orichimaru which was not Water and Earth Chakra left his body leaving the newly created wood chakra to dominate his body.
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