The only thing I think you could improve the discriptoin it's a bit lacking but the book is amazing ๐๐๐ค๐๐คฎ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ฒ๐๐๐คจ๐๐๐๐๐ฅถ๐ฒ
Started of good, now has gone downhill. Too many fillers 3-4 chapters worth (mostly back and forth between characters with the story not moving forward or anywhere.) For the first time I'm dropping a novel. It had potential but MC became OP too fast and the author became greedy. In my opinion it's not worth spending the spirit stones and if you have subscription its not worth wasting time when you can read other good novels
Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.Writing Quality(4stars):It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with itStory Development(4stars):Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.Character Design(4stars):Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
Good read and mc are very merciless. I like how realistic the world-building is, I can imagine the firms monopolising superpowers to profit and possibly take over the world. It adds a sense of relentless hype to the story. good job!
so far its nice the MC not getting anything from the system without money. so mc must work to gain money to exchange for system point. no free lunch or easy present for the MC (for now) except the cultivation strength of disciple don't know what will happen at more. chapter but, until this chapter the mc need to gain money to exchange with system point to buy things for the sect. kinda like top up system but more harsh to mc
Omg! The plotline for this is something I would usually go for, and everything is quite intriguing. The story is very much easy to read, and there are not much grammatical errors.
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