Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Writing Quality: 2/5
The writing is bad, maybe try grammarly.It is very dialogue heavy and written like a script. A story needs a good balance or dialogue and descriptions.
Update Stability: 5/5
I put that for everyone
Story Development: 3/5
It is not bad, but I wish I could enjoy it. It would be better if there was more descriptions added. Also some stuff was confusing that I had to reread to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Character Design: 3/5
Your characters are not bad, but once again I wish there was more descriptions to tell me about them. Dialogue does not give the depth of a person's feelings, motives, etc.
World Background: 3/5
Your story could be a gem, I enjoy what you are making and trying to do, but once again, we come back to descriptions; there needs to be some with paragraphs and not something written like a script.
You are on the right road, but maybe research more on writing or get inspired by other books while also using one of the sites that help in grammar.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I like the premise of Save State. It gives room for a lot of experimenting with different Timelines. I have only read two chapters so far but I do enjoy the concept.
Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.
Popular Reviews
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
The writing is bad, maybe try grammarly.It is very dialogue heavy and written like a script. A story needs a good balance or dialogue and descriptions.
Update Stability: 5/5
I put that for everyone
Story Development: 3/5
It is not bad, but I wish I could enjoy it. It would be better if there was more descriptions added. Also some stuff was confusing that I had to reread to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Character Design: 3/5
Your characters are not bad, but once again I wish there was more descriptions to tell me about them. Dialogue does not give the depth of a person's feelings, motives, etc.
World Background: 3/5
Your story could be a gem, I enjoy what you are making and trying to do, but once again, we come back to descriptions; there needs to be some with paragraphs and not something written like a script.
You are on the right road, but maybe research more on writing or get inspired by other books while also using one of the sites that help in grammar.
Keep up the good work!
Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.