Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World

This novel is complete mess.
I got the impression that the author still has no idea what to write about. Most of the text looks like gibberish. The author has thrown a lot of very vague ideas into one pile and is constantly jumping from one idea to another. Moreover, the description of what is happening is so blurry that it looks like a complete absurdity: legacy, war, puppet emperor, creator, etc. - some kind of set of incoherent words and out of nowhere appeared characters that exist in a far away. The author also jumps in time into the future, then into the past. The cultivation system has only the names of the levels and nothing else.
The author also constantly says that the main character did not control his actions and his mind was unstable, although there was nothing like that at all. In every second sentence, the word "system" is repeated: "he felt it in his system," "it infiltrated his system," etc. What's wrong with the author's (or translator's) system?
Main conflict of novel: multiple personality disorder of MC.
Seriously. Is this the plot of a fantasy novel? Of course, there is a huge amount of water and fillers in the novel. In general, reading this novel is a waste of time.

no more words. thanks for the story!............................................................................................................................................................

The author's style is unique, and he is still laying the groundwork in any way he can. I enjoy stories that last a long time, and this is one of them. I can't wait for more now that the tale is starting to make sense. The trope is good, but the execution is lacking. Yet it is still good. The story progressed slowly. For character design, there are some confusing points in which the author promises that things happen for a reason so that the MC might have more reasons why he had that kind of personality. The world background is provided briefly, and the writing quality is decent.

well the story was interesting upto some chapters but well split personalities and mind/personality manipulation(with/without Mc realising it) and stuff aren't my cup of tea .... so yeah I'm stopping.....but it was a good read

A shameless review and a proper review to post since the novel has reached 100 chapters. So, I would like to establish some thoughts about what you should expect from these 100 chapters.

- My writing was decent, and at the beginning of the novel, it was kind of unstable since I was still trying to play with my words. And my style at that phase was not actually accepted by the mass, so I changed it slowly. I can't tell if my writing has improved since it is hard to self-edit since I can't notice my mistakes. Should I hire an editor? It would be impossible since I don't have money and don't have much time to send plenty of chapters to an editor.

- The story wasn't established as I wanted to show that the MC was aimless, or rather doesn't have a specific goal to stay except going to the Immortal Heaven where immortals live. It was kind of messy, I agree since all of the encounters the MC had weren't that long. But along with it, after chapters 50 and above, there will be some sign of the plot. And truth be told, the plot was too slow.

- Long side stories to make the world background more introduced. But not to the point that it won't be connected with the MC. All of the side stories were made for the plot and a path for the MC's journey.

- The character design was a bit off, you may say. He is an immortal sage but still acts like a kid? Well, it will be for character development and part of the plot and discussions about the MC. [May contain spoiler] MC had abilities sealed, but some were activated every time. One of the examples is the Absorption Body, which works with mana and Qi, and I am saying that he also has mind abilities. Let's say that there were some side effects that he still didn't notice as he didn't pay much attention to them since it was natural for him at this point. And I'll mention that in these 100 chapters, only once or twice is his personality pointed out, so in the future chapters you will learn more about the MC.

- What to expect in these 100 chapters might have been mentioned but I am getting excited with the world background and the MC's background story. Proper background story to understand the MC more.

- The cultivation part, well, the Heaven where the MC was, is the weakest of them all. So, I am telling you that in the upper heavens, you will see what cultivation is. There were mystical arts, and some strong techniques, so expect more when the MC lays his feet on the upper heavens.

So, my style wasn't really acceptable and not that good since I started messing up with the readers' thoughts. I also did that with my other work and have still not learned since it comes naturally. So, if it is tolerable, thank you for staying with me.

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The story has a good premise, but bad development. It was fine for him to act like a moron for the first 50 chapters but from then on it just became irritating.
So you're left with that recycled garbage story of an 'amazing' character that solves other peoples servants without return. Before you try to refute, accepting goods and demanding goods are two different things.
A possible defence to the author is that this is all in an attempt to drag on the novel; since he introduced numerous realms that have yet to be discovered. Even still, since said chapters aren't out yet, and this is purely speculation, it's a so-so novel.

I already understood how the story will be from the moment there were 2 chapters about an unnecessary fight...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,