Just to make it clear to everyone who is coming into this story, neither I, who am the author, liked the beginning of this story, if you're looking to read a good story, in the beginning, don't read it.
That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it.
Story is good. But the MC quiet useless. Dumb and stupid decision. Weak for being a former s-class hunter. More like a ****ty hunter. Many forced interaction and filler. Sometimes it pain in the ass to read it. Come 12 yr with 40+ mental age still looking for a date. More like a forced romance. Its like more ****ty to reincarnation a ****ty hunter. But well if you can ignore all the fault u can still enjoy the novel. But for me, sorry it’s not my cup of tea. And sorry for being harsh.
Very very Dog-**** start the earlier chapters just plainly showed the author just put what he wanted and it was very inconsistent as well, character building yes there is, character design? My answer to that is negative, I mean why design a bloody ass S-ranked reincarnator when his experiences are just plain ****, can't be used. I mean the boy has no determination, no perseverance, no traits whatsoever that should be shown before he was reincarnated with his memories. I mean not just that, the grammar isnt getting any better at all like what the actual F***. The Author says that he is training his writing skills, truth is, he says he is Brazilian and we should forgive him for typos when he gives absolutely no fucks about improving and just says those at the end of the chapter to have an excuse at not correcting his grammar mistakes. He hasn't improved at all and I don't know how people can manage to give this a 5 star I mean full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, hypocrite-like author and worst of all he doesn't even bother improving and just uses excuses.
The grammar definitely needs improvements, and the choices of the characters felt stupid, but that's okay, as long as you actually improve it will be good.
Ok now lemme start off and say I don’t like the mc one bit. Sure the story looks good but when you read it it becomes a ****show. the mc is the most fucking dumbest person I’ve ever read. Like where is this supposed “S rank”? His awareness was so bad he got slashed in the fucking chest by a bandit behind him “he didn’t die somehow” *cough* *cough*plot amour* *cough* cough* why he couldn’t end those bandits was simple awareness? Are you fucking serious,weren’t you supposed to be a S rank in your last life?? but anyway this whole story has little to no potential. I’ve dropped it because I just can’t with this stupid mc. If you still wanna read this story DONT. You will lose your remaining braincells
The first 70 chapters are Soo good. But then there comes the love part and it all goes stoinks. A simple date takes about 4 chapters. Buying clothes = chapter. It just became a slice of life now . His power level is stuck. No level ups, or anything. Pure school thingy, btw the school ark is useless because he didn't learn anything, well besides kissing a lady. Please author, don't forget his power leveling. Its slowly becoming a trash. Any experienced adventurer should focus on leveling up bec he's near death a lot of times because he's weak. But there he is, focusing on girls. Damn. I'm reaaallyy gettin bored.
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That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it.
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Keep up the good work.
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