Shameless Author here with 5 star review. ask away if you have any questions and let me know if you find any mistakes, I'll fix them as soon as possible...Well, Thanks for reading My Book and happy reading......
Not the best thing i've ever read of course, not by a long shot but i do see some potential. the world background is very mediocre. the writing style leaves much to be desired like how you use a lot of "..." in every dialogue so u can reduce the usage of this. There are very few grammatical mistakes so that's good but that can also be improved. all in all i'll pay attention to you for a while.
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