I really like how the story is told for now, and the grammar is good too. Less than ten characters have appeared so far, but I feel that this is going to be the kind of story without many 2D characters, but with more 3D characters and not so cartoonish. I could feel it through the dialogues and the way the characters express themselves in some situations.
Of course, I can't stop talking about the protagonist, who for me is one of the highlights of the story so far. He is ironic, serious, intelligent, mischievous and, above all, a great character.
Thanks to all this, this story deserves 5 stars (and my first review).
Just stopping here to give the classic 5 stars that every author gives!
This is my first novel about cultivation, video games and systems, but I've had in mind for a long time the idea of this novel and the concepts and mechanics that I'm applying, so you can be sure to read something consistent!
Besides, that's all I want to say, enjoy the reading.
Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions.
Finally a video game novel that it’s not the same old MC travels back in time and becomes a pro because he starts stealing everything with knowledge of the future.
No, no, this novel is actually great with an actual skilled MC
Thanks author
Review (Chapter 80)
The novel started off great in the beginning, i was absolutely wow’ed by the introductory chapters. But then it starts to fall off, pretty much levels dont matter to the mc, from the first fight to the boss fight. after a little while its explained how his attributes are higher than normal for his level and his 120 rating further increases the effects? But lets talk about the spider, an arrow blows off half the bosses face ‘ok a consumable whatever’ he uses a spear and controls it to spin inside the boss monster’s body getting “super critical hits” Okay he wins bc he used environment but then how about the Mythic boss which he shouldve died just being near the fight and he causes the boss to be weary of what a lvl 15 when the boss and players are so high he cant even see their levels. he uses his ultra big brain from being there a little bit to figure out the lightning patterns that the guilds who studied to fight the boss didnt even notice and uses the environment to electrocute the boss and his sword to cut and kill this super high ranked mythic boss and proceed to demolish and intimidate the high ranking players and then escape? Cant continue reading because game mechanics dont apply here and the stat page is meaningless. I enjoy the background building but inside the game i just cant anymore.
Chapter 220 Review-Overall great read for picky and broad viewers alike. It’s been a while since a video game novel has been this good imo
At first interactions feel a bit empty and the language doesn’t flow well, but it’s drastically improved over time. There are still some “he/she” mixups though.
The story and world are all very good. The plot progresses nicely along the main character and everyone feels real. There are some things that don’t make sense like the MC’s ability to fight things stronger than him. Even if he has extra stats per level, some of these enemies with their level would one shot home before he could blink, so it feels like the MC wins for no reason sometimes but it’s entertaining regardless.
I can't express in words how much I am hyped for this promising and interesting story. Nando is an amazing writer with a solid ability of keeping content interesting yet publish daily. It is a pleasure to read and see the growth of his work and trust me, this work is going to be at the WN top, so save your time and start reading now!!!
I have been reading the author's other novel for a long time and he has never disappointed me. This new novel looked more promising than the previous one, I will definitely follow it, especially since the grammar of this novel is very good!
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Of course, I can't stop talking about the protagonist, who for me is one of the highlights of the story so far. He is ironic, serious, intelligent, mischievous and, above all, a great character.
Thanks to all this, this story deserves 5 stars (and my first review).
This is my first novel about cultivation, video games and systems, but I've had in mind for a long time the idea of this novel and the concepts and mechanics that I'm applying, so you can be sure to read something consistent!
Besides, that's all I want to say, enjoy the reading.
Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions.
No, no, this novel is actually great with an actual skilled MC
Thanks author
The novel started off great in the beginning, i was absolutely wow’ed by the introductory chapters. But then it starts to fall off, pretty much levels dont matter to the mc, from the first fight to the boss fight. after a little while its explained how his attributes are higher than normal for his level and his 120 rating further increases the effects? But lets talk about the spider, an arrow blows off half the bosses face ‘ok a consumable whatever’ he uses a spear and controls it to spin inside the boss monster’s body getting “super critical hits” Okay he wins bc he used environment but then how about the Mythic boss which he shouldve died just being near the fight and he causes the boss to be weary of what a lvl 15 when the boss and players are so high he cant even see their levels. he uses his ultra big brain from being there a little bit to figure out the lightning patterns that the guilds who studied to fight the boss didnt even notice and uses the environment to electrocute the boss and his sword to cut and kill this super high ranked mythic boss and proceed to demolish and intimidate the high ranking players and then escape? Cant continue reading because game mechanics dont apply here and the stat page is meaningless. I enjoy the background building but inside the game i just cant anymore.
At first interactions feel a bit empty and the language doesn’t flow well, but it’s drastically improved over time. There are still some “he/she” mixups though.
The story and world are all very good. The plot progresses nicely along the main character and everyone feels real. There are some things that don’t make sense like the MC’s ability to fight things stronger than him. Even if he has extra stats per level, some of these enemies with their level would one shot home before he could blink, so it feels like the MC wins for no reason sometimes but it’s entertaining regardless.