The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something)
Overall, I do love the story.
In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so.
System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards.
I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying.
Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km.
The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
The sytem is dumb. it gives stUpid rewards. the mc is retarted and is saying dumb shit constantLy its a baD book honestly. I read lIke 20 chapters and dropped it.
Very captivating and interesting, not much plot holes at all. Still hungrily waiting for more chapters. Thank you author, for writing a non-human MC novel.
So far, I've really enjoyed the story. The one thing I wish people wouldn't do is post comments like "omg mc so returded" or "why dont you try dis!!1!1!!!". It's really annoying considering that while the MC is kinda dumb, compared to this generation now, I swear he's a prodigious genius.
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Thanks for the great book author! (/^▽^)/
In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so.
System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards.
I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km.
The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.