I like the plot It kinda reflects on my personality so I'm going to wait for more update in the future I wanna see what going to happened on the future cant wait please update more
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Please, can you translate this work again ? I would be grateful. The story is quite different from what I thought it would be. Surely the rhytm is quite slow and there are a lot of descriptions, but I would love to know, in the end, who really is our MC ;)
Writing Quality is great, there are no rough sentences, easy to understand and the way you write the fighting scenes are good.(Kiss Of Death, Oof... I remembered DitF) Stability Updates are also good, I assume you update almost everyday. Story Development is also good, the pace is good, the fighting are good... Though, I think some of the elements are already used though, but there's no harm done, it is still unique it it's own way. Character Design is good, in Ch1, there are already too many characters, there are those that are based on some Movie or Greek mythology(Thrain, son of Thor, Oof.. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings) World Background is good, futuristic world with advance gaming technology...Seems. great.GOOD WORK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP.*THUMBS UP*
Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel.The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration.I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days.Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
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