Pls, don't mind the grammar bad review since it finally got fixed just recently... so in short, you can finally read it flawlessly and with no grammatical mistakes (it might have but you know nobody is perfect)
So this is a nice Book. The mc is op but still not invincible. That also means that the fights with him aren’t boring. The kingdom building didn’t start at the beginning but it’s still very good. I would say the only „bad“ thing about this book is the English. And it’s not that bad, there are just some spelling mistakes here and there. It’s alright.
Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing.
Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve.
The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them.
I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
Hi guys this is your author Don here,
Sorry for shamelessly writing a review for myself
this is my first book so the writing quality might be low but
ill try my best to improve everything related to writing a book
please bear with me ....
oh if you want a story with op mc building a kingdom conquering nearby kingdoms without collecting beauties like trophies this is for you..
In my first review I said that the only bad thing is the grammar.
Guess what! Grammar is improving and if there are errors it’s almost unnoticeable. Still the book itself, the writing style and the characters didn’t lack anything. 5/5 would most definitely recommend. Great book don!
Author I had a lot of expectations before reading this novel but after reading I was greatly disappointed ..in kingdom building novel where you said that he is not a usual MC with all goody personality but still he treats his subordinates as friends take oath to protect everyone ...how is this even possible and subjects such as elven girls Don't even fully respect him....are you kidding me if his subordinates don't even respect him fully and the MC don't let them kneel to pledge loyalty since he take them as his friend from get go are you kidding really and yeah can you add R-18 please we want ***** scenes too it's a main element in cases of empire and all after all kings takes many concubines and all so make it practical please
No harem, so pack your bags boys. Everyone else can stay, I guess...
The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book.
Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30.
I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!
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Great book 9/10 would recommend
Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve.
The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them.
I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
Sorry for shamelessly writing a review for myself
this is my first book so the writing quality might be low but
ill try my best to improve everything related to writing a book
please bear with me ....
oh if you want a story with op mc building a kingdom conquering nearby kingdoms without collecting beauties like trophies this is for you..
Guess what! Grammar is improving and if there are errors it’s almost unnoticeable. Still the book itself, the writing style and the characters didn’t lack anything. 5/5 would most definitely recommend. Great book don!
The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book.
Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30.
I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!